Error correction, FORGIVENESS, Btzelem Elokim

EGADS!!!
major faux pas: to have sent out a draft
(widely, well, important, submissions)
instead of the 'final version'
of a sensitive poem!
...what embarrassment, exposure,
aborted thought published
misconceptions generated!!!!

iNSTEAD OF THIS ONE (to follow. Post-(re-)checking)
instead
of what
should have been said
stated for quotation, trumpeted.

now dog embarrassed,
just missing the tail
between hind legs,
and if I'd had
a doghouse,
that is where
I would have skulked off to.
Again.

O FOOLISH ERROR
Haste makes trouble
beyond waste
magnified by this Internet

CLICK ADDICTION
Too quick dissemination
of what were private thoughts,
'framblings'(c)
playing w fire

oh me oh my
fooled, once more
by my own
limitation(s)
soooo sorry
though,
no one hurt
but me

NOW HOW
to move along?
what to do,
send it again?
what might be called,
'final version'
-- at this moment

OR MIGHT that just ( !! )
evoke more attention
to my public indiscretion
when perhaps no one had noticed,
(unless machmir or yeshivish,
for whom I would lose even a chance
of any further
consideration)

How could I and why?

Simply put:
An embarrassment of riches,
this thinking poetic,
flow
of poesy
now
,apologies,
feeling, lame,
foolish, heavy

now, o now,
thinking out loud,
about damage control

as if , one could revert memory,
to its pristine state
not back to baseline, more like de-creation,
Hah! once it's been cast into neurophysiology,
synaptic connection, transmitter~receptor
de novo fabrication
{Thank G()d there is more immediate
commercialization, in wireless
connections, before aromatic
mediation on the Net}
Could modulate fast(er) with drugs,
severe trauma or brain surgery,
in that order of effectivity!!!
prior to frank lesion, death.

Or, hope springs eternal: the real cure
is Intense Humor!
true laughter
, from resounding empathetic
belly rolling,
unwhorled from the length
of the gut!

This indeed, does cure sooooo much
the basis of Lasting Love,
Btzelem Elokim
Loving kindness
the kind that age's gracefully.

What we pray for
Rachmanus,
over
Din

Please G()d, May it be so,
Here on Earth.

k. adam

Love, the might have been

from the week of Parshat Terumah //
ending 9 Feb 08
II.

The gap that was

was filled
as if
by water,

naturally.
with ease.and the grace.of Being
Yehudim.

Something for us to remember,
if not to forget.

For This is no trivial matter,

and, behind closed doors,
in the privacy of home,

I would hope that we would find,
in each other,

all that intimacy that ears, lips, and mouth,
and more

offer in the holy covenant of matrimony
in wanting to hear each other,

the song , the the voice of woman
in unison, for one another
muse, if not exquisite collaborator

in all, in music, which is of course
gift to Bezalel & David,

reaffirmation of love,
itself, an everlasting bond

with HaShem

bShalom

One Voice, covenantal wedded Love

from the week of Parshat Terumah // ending 9 Feb 08
I.
I got the impression of a sea change
between our phone talk & your getting sick
,there was some nature of otherness.
For Whatever reason,
I so hope that this note finds you well.
Blessings for a wonderful week.
Just returned from the third Sheva Brachote
of the loveliest young couple,

Maya Kunin & Yanky Reisel
uniting the families of

Dr. Joshua & Janet Kunin of Zichron Ya’akov, Israel
(my adopted family)

and

Rabbi Yehoshua & Rochelle Reisel of Miami, Florida, USA

I was blessed to stand among the unanimous
who said and say, with One Voice,
We are ecstatically happy, about this union
and, auspicious blessings with hopes of yet
another splendid week passed, and ahead,
Shavuah tov tov

as if there is, but one day to celebrate, Love

APOLOGIES FOR THE HIATUS~unavoidable, yes,
like death, & taxes,
both of which came to bear,
two funerals, two courts,
still alive,
moi, I,

Belated introduction:
Optimistic realist , Hashkafat pratistist(sic)
outgoing introspective poet~songstress
celebrating Bezalel's art, David's song;
Zionist scientist, EcoMinded communicator.
bizSch grad (11/06), Loving the world's gifts
from Hashem, seeking her soulmate b'sheert
husband partner.
& me, independent of spirit, but I love shiurim
by men, by and among women,
and other very social involvement,
chesed projects, kiruv,
then there is the art, music, song~poem
to be shared behind 'the invisible mechitzah...."
so, I would want to be, not only tolerated
{{I shiver to just write this thought}},
but loved, respected, admired, invited,
involved among the ladies of the community,
Yes, references available upon request! :::
Heads of Ohr Ya'akov Yeshiva, my chevreusa partner,
others...more, from the aspect of science, physics,
perception