EGADS!!!
major faux pas: to have sent out a draft
(widely, well, important, submissions)
instead of the 'final version'
of a sensitive poem!
...what embarrassment, exposure,
aborted thought published
misconceptions generated!!!!
iNSTEAD OF THIS ONE (to follow. Post-(re-)checking)
instead
of what
should have been said
stated for quotation, trumpeted.
now dog embarrassed,
just missing the tail
between hind legs,
and if I'd had
a doghouse,
that is where
I would have skulked off to.
Again.
O FOOLISH ERROR
Haste makes trouble
beyond waste
magnified by this Internet
CLICK ADDICTION
Too quick dissemination
of what were private thoughts,
'framblings'(c)
playing w fire
oh me oh my
fooled, once more
by my own
limitation(s)
soooo sorry
though,
no one hurt
but me
NOW HOW
to move along?
what to do,
send it again?
what might be called,
'final version'
-- at this moment
OR MIGHT that just ( !! )
evoke more attention
to my public indiscretion
when perhaps no one had noticed,
(unless machmir or yeshivish,
for whom I would lose even a chance
of any further
consideration)
How could I and why?
Simply put:
An embarrassment of riches,
this thinking poetic,
flow
of poesy
now
,apologies,
feeling, lame,
foolish, heavy
now, o now,
thinking out loud,
about damage control
as if , one could revert memory,
to its pristine state
not back to baseline, more like de-creation,
Hah! once it's been cast into neurophysiology,
synaptic connection, transmitter~receptor
de novo fabrication
{Thank G()d there is more immediate
commercialization, in wireless
connections, before aromatic
mediation on the Net}
Could modulate fast(er) with drugs,
severe trauma or brain surgery,
in that order of effectivity!!!
prior to frank lesion, death.
Or, hope springs eternal: the real cure
is Intense Humor!
true laughter
, from resounding empathetic
belly rolling,
unwhorled from the length
of the gut!
This indeed, does cure sooooo much
the basis of Lasting Love,
Btzelem Elokim
Loving kindness
the kind that age's gracefully.
What we pray for
Rachmanus,
over
Din
Please G()d, May it be so,
Here on Earth.
k. adam
Sunday, February 24, 2008
Error correction, FORGIVENESS, Btzelem Elokim
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